Chapter One (Public Release)

Thank you for the detailed comment. We put a lot of effort into the animation at the end as I wanted it to see what we were capable of. So I'm happy it came out well. As you can tell, none of us are native English speakers, When I write the story I use Grammarly and Quillbot, and sometimes even Google Translate to make it at least half-decent. Some days after, I go back and do the proofreading by myself. At the end of Chapter 1, I started to write the story right in Grammarly to avoid common mistakes. About the introductions to the giantesses; Severson making some portraits, and we already have a little bio for the girls, we plan to post it here on Patreon soon., but their personalities would become clear as the game progresses. We try to make Chapter 2 more interactive, with death scenes and minigame(s). The backstory is well-developed enough, maybe one or two plot twists will fit in... Cheers! - Thaw

This was a good start and I'm interested to see where you guys take the game from here, the story and the characters have been set up well enough and I'm also liking the art style so far, that animation at the end of this 1st chapter was actually pretty cool as well I liked that a lot! The only real problems that I noticed so far was there were quite a bit of spelling errors and just general grammar mistakes throughout, I think having someone proofread all the text would help with that a lot, and the dialogue seemed a bit awkward at times especially with the guards in the trash city, proofreading would help a lot with that as well. The things I'm personally looking forward to the most are the introductions to the 3 giantesses we'll be dealing with and definitely gameplay segments where you can game over like the minigames mentioned in another post can't wait for that. Excited to see where you guys take the game from here and to see more of the giantesses ;), good luck on the work for Chapter 2!!

Nasolorn

Thank you for the feedback. Yes, we wanted to keep this chapter short to get feedback early, also the first release was more about creating the game's framework and seeing how could we work together efficiently with Severson. As the back story is quite well developed already, I think we can include more action in the upcoming chapters.