Input!
Added 2022-10-16 20:03:02 +0000 UTCAs Johhny five would say I would love your input.
I have had a few messages about how they feel the game is a little inconsistant with the story line. A critic that I can't overly deny. I want it to feel like a day in anybodys life. That is to say not stringently structured, but it does fall foul of the problem of where shall the MC go next, while I am writing it. So I am going to take a few day off rendering the game to properly plan out the story and try to get some sembelence of a planned structure so it doesn't feel all over the place. This won't have to much of an impact on the next update. It will probably come out with just under 200 instead of just over 200 renders.
Here is where I would like your input. Either here or on the discord let me know what you would like, Which character should get more of a push, would you like anything changed, lengthened, shortened or introduced in the story, even if it is story that has been.
Or even if you are happy with the way it is.
Any idea you have, throw my way, I will read through.
Comments
With respect to Red, the situation with the offspring and the queen may have her second-guessing herself on that particular front. Once that situation reaches something approaching stability, it would make sense for her to express an interest again. One suspects the queen will also want to take advantage of the situation....
RD
2022-10-17 04:40:06 +0000 UTCI'd say it's a good pace by now. I'm sure everyone will be willing to share with you how he wants any particular character/faction to have more screen time (I have this wish as well), but with this variety it will quickly degrade to biased dev process, so will result in nothing good. What I'd like to see more/less in general: + More teasing, flirting, flashing and so on. There are a lot of examples how it was done by yourself in past builds (Red flashing on sofa, clumsy Casey as she bumped into MC for the first time on the road with her commando bottom on the plain sight, evil trio from Rose faction losing their clothes in Mc's presence and so on). Why is it so positively good for the game? There is no way, with this quantity of different girls, you can afford to do a lot of sex-related scenes per release. Like, in the last build, s,Anne+Rachael scene was some tenth of renders, but in players' eyes it's only one scene. Even if it's a good one. While any of those mini-scenes which I've mentioned can be also counted as 1 scene. For example, Casey being commando girl could be her permanent feature (even her cheer routine could be more exciting with that "adjustment"), since she is an airhead and it could be natural for her to constantly forget her panties around MC. ) Other girls can have their own "features" as well. So, to keep folks entertained and excited, you may want to do 3-4 of those mini-tease/flash/flirt beside one main scene, maybe 1-2 if there are 2 main ones planned (it's up to you to decide the specifics, ofc, just giving an example). That can be done with girls from different factions as encounters/accidents, so we can see many girls in action in each build while not really forcing you to significantly increase render quantity per release. Win-win imo. ) + As I feel like you definitely do not want this VN to transform into a sandbox, it would be a good move to create some kind of "memories place", in a form of a cellphone, smart-bracelet or whatever. There, we could see, maybe at some, frequently encountering, reserved story places (outside of ongoing sex scenes), which girls/gods/aliens/etc did we encounter, which were penetrated and we can see their status/preferences, and, ofc, a gallery place, with all of those scenes we already had in previous builds. Like, they are present either way, just intead of player being forced to find that long-forgotten save he wants to review (when he wants to refresh a previous encounter result with any specific girl, for example), it would be comfortably structured in a specific spot he can access from almost any game point. - Maybe not do various references in each release, like, I can see how people who are in theme can appreciate those, but people who don't just wade through them and see them as fillers. Again, if they are present, maybe give them some sex-oriented direction. It's an adult game after all, especially considering MC's main objective. ) Also, since I'm at a writing mode, I'd say - maybe anyone can volunteer to spellcheck and fish out typos? Those are nasty man! >_< P.S. I know people's favourites, but we did not see much of Shortsea and Sarah yet, while imo those are fairly interesting, especially Sarah. Looking forward to their showtime! ^_^ Also, some time ago, when Blue got mysteriously preggoed, Red approached MC in pretty provocative clothes and with promising intentions to not being left behind, we will get a cue of that jealosy pressure, yes? )
Argrond
2022-10-16 21:51:34 +0000 UTCSister Anne has stated that she won't until he has slept with all of the other nuns first. Nyx, I was sure I had stated that he wasn't sure if he could with the gods, so he was going to let it play out. If it isn't properly sated. Those goes on the list to fix. I only have a couple of the nuns left to do mokori scenes with so it shouldn't be too long for Sister Anne.
John Patrick Jody Morris
2022-10-16 20:29:48 +0000 UTCI've been kind of confused why MC hasn't hooked up with Nyx or Sister Anne. I get that he wants to form a relationship with the girls, but it almost seems like he's afraid to have sex.
tinmoosel
2022-10-16 20:22:42 +0000 UTC
