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Chapter 848 : Promotions!

The reason why Fujin felt the tactic of declining any requests until Hiruzen voluntarily offered something was useless was rather simple. He was no longer just an upcoming ninja who could lead Konoha's forces in the future. Despite his young age, he had already become such a ninja.

As such, there was no longer any need for Fujin to scheme, play games or barter to get what he wanted. He would directly ask for it, just as he did a few moments ago. Of course, he couldn't go overboard and there would still be some techniques that the village may not give him, but Fujin understood that properly.

Tsunade glanced at Hiruzen. From the way Fujin framed his words, it felt like Hiruzen had already agreed to ask Tsunade to help him with this when she returned to the village. Hiruzen could only nod in return. After all, he had promised Fujin, even though it had been several years.

Tsunade turned her attention back to Fujin and said, “I can, but that technique has a terrifying drawback if used incorrectly. I'm afraid that it'll be more disadvantageous to you instead of increasing your strength.”

Fujin frowned and asked, “It happens only if I overexert my cells, right?”

Tsunade nodded. Fujin said, “Then it's fine. I'll be careful.”

Tsunade sighed and explained, “Under normal circumstances, I wouldn't have opposed. Unfortunately, your training method is anything but normal. You still use Shadow Clones to increase your training efficiency. That technique is inherently dangerous to use in this manner. If you learn how to extract more chakra from your cells, you'll be tempted to do so while you train. Even though you won't feel the side effects immediately, you'll regret it years later. That's why…”

Fujin cut Tsunade off, “I think you're missing a point.”

Tsunade asked, “Hmm, what do you mean?”

Fujin answered, “I train to increase my strength. What's the meaning in training if it makes me weaker? So, you don't need to worry. Unless my life is in danger or the village is in great danger, I won't resort to doing that.”

Tsunade frowned thinking, ‘That is logical… Unfortunately, maintaining a clear head during an intense moment isn't very common. I have seen too many ruin their future by doing something stupid during training.’

“It's fine, Tsuna…” Hiruzen muttered, giving his approval once again. Tsunade sighed, “Alright, but please be mindful, Fujin.”

Fujin nodded, “I will. So, when can we start?”

Tsunade replied, “It is a complicated process and I'll need half a day or more to help you energize your cells. We have a meeting in a few hours. You haven't forgotten, have you?”

Fujin muttered, “Not really. Ibiki sent a messenger to me earlier. It shouldn't take too long, but I suppose we can't stop in between.”
Tsunade nodded, “That's right. Meet me on the top floor of the hospital tomorrow at 7.”
Fujin replied, “Alright.”

He glanced at the trio and asked, “So, can I leave or is there anything else?”
Hiruzen answered, “You can leave.”
Fujin replied, “Alright, take care,” before disappearing from the room.

Silence engulfed the room once again, before Jiraiya broke it by asking, “Say, how did the meeting change from us asking a request from him to him asking a request from Tsunade?”

Hiruzen sighed, “Now you get a little of what I mean… This is still fine. Tsunade, be very careful with the words you use around him. There's no telling how he may interpret them. I have regretted not doing so more than a few times.”

Tsunade thought, ‘I knew it!’

——

A few hours later, a meeting began in one of the meeting rooms in the Hokage Building. Leading the meeting were Tsunade and Hiruzen, who sat next to each other around a long table. Fujin sat on the opposite side, thinking, ‘Interesting, I always wondered how these meetings went…’

Hiruzen glanced at everyone in the room. Ibiki, Anko and Hayate sat on his left while three old Jounins from Hyuga, Yamanaka and Aburame clan sat on his right. Hiruzen said, “Due to unforeseen circumstances, this meeting was delayed for too long. It's time to decide whom to promote to Chunin based on their respective performances.”

The Chunin Exams had taken a backseat after Orochimaru and Sunagakure's assault. Konoha was forced to devote all its energy to focus on the aftermath, be it Fujin leading Konoha's armies, the negotiations with Sunagakure or preparing the village for another unexpected war.

It was only after Fujin and the Sannins returned to the village that things calmed down. However, with Hiruzen in a coma and Tsunade focused on healing him, this meeting got delayed again.

Ibiki said, “Six of the nine finalists were our Genins. The ones under consideration today are Haruno Sakura, Hyuga Neji, Uzumaki Naruto, Aburame Shino, Nara Shikamaru and Uchiha Sasuke...”

Anko interrupted him, “Let's get the obvious one out of the way before discussions heat up, shall we? Sakura isn't ready to be promoted.”

Hayate coughed and said, “Her plan against Gaara was quite good. It might have worked if he wasn't a Jinchuriki. Unfortunately, she failed to react once her plan failed.”

The old Yamanaka Jounin commented, “I'm not sure whether the plan was created by her…”

“It wasn't…” The eyes in the room moved to Fujin, who added, “The plan was created by Kurama Illumi-san, who trained her for the finals. However, considering how unfair the matchup was, I wouldn't consider this a negative point. Of course, it's a moot point since she failed to think of any back up plans, which was the hidden test he created for her. It'll be better for her to remain a Genin and gain more experience and strength.”

Everyone nodded. Tsunade looked around and said, “Since no one opposes, Sakura will remain a Genin.”

She glanced at Anko and asked, “Any more obvious ones?”

Anko thought for a bit and replied, “No, the rest are a bit complicated. The Nara kid may be, but he lacks strength. Then there's the Aburame kid. He performed very well in the first two rounds and the preliminaries but didn't get any opportunity in the finals due to the attack.”

Ibiki said, “Let's consider the Nara first. Though Shikamaru doesn't have outrageous strength or stamina, what he displayed shows he'll be an excellent team leader.”

Hayate added, “I agree. His plan was too ingenious. Even though I was the proctor, I didn't see it coming.”

The others in the room also praised Shikamaru's quick thinking and his ability to use the terrain to the maximum effect. Fujin didn't bother speaking since the result was obvious. With no one opposing, Tsunade decided that Shikamaru would be promoted.

Ibiki turned the pages in his files and asked, “So, what do we do with Shino? His performance in the preliminaries was eye-catching. He showed sufficient strength as well as good planning, playing with his opponent like he was an academy student.”

Anko added, “His team completed the second round very quickly as well. Considering his clan, he must have played an important part...”

Hiruzen sighed and said, “Be that may, we can't promote someone who didn't fight in the finals. Though no one will say anything, it'll raise some eyebrows among the guests we invited. He'll have to participate in the next Chunin exam.”

With Hiruzen speaking up, no one else said anything. Fujin thought, ‘It looks like Konoha gives a lot more importance to the guests than other villages. From what I remember, Kankuro and Temari were promoted to Jounins despite not participating in any more Chunin exams. On the other hand, Konoha kept Naruto at the Genin rank for who knows how long despite there being several provisions for promoting ninjas without participating in the Chunin exams…’

Hayate said, “The next one is Hyuga Neji. He's a rather interesting one. At the start of the exam, he was considered as the strongest Genin from our village. Yet, he lost his first fight in the finals. Then again, we can't entirely blame him for it. Most Jounins would do worse against a non-stop barrage of supercharged Infinite Breakthrough jutsus.”

No one disagreed with Hayate. Everyone recalled how pitiful Neji looked against Naruto, the host of the terrifying Nine Tailed Beast! Even more absurd was the absence of any traces of exhaustion on Naruto's face. Even the ninjas in the meeting room, apart from Fujin, Hiruzen and Tsunade, would be troubled while dealing with such a barrage. Other than hiding underground and attacking from there, they didn't have many other options.

The old Hyuga Jounin spoke, “While the Hyuga clan has methods to deal with opponents who fight at range, those techniques aren't taught to our Genins. Besides, even the ones who are taught may not be able to withstand such a barrage without resorting to Earth Release jutsus. His performance, despite being at such a disadvantage, was very good. We can promote him just like Shikamaru.”

“I don't agree with your observations.”

[A/N: Next chapter is partially done as well. I should complete it in 4-5 hours.]

Comments

Mmm sounds like Tsunades technique to strengthen Fujin might be more bad than good. Using his full strength could be overtaxing and in the final battle that’s likely to be a real risk despite his belief he can just run away. And more importantly the newly mentioned issue that he can no longer use shadow clones for training. Shouldn’t he have thought that more an issue? Literally the only reason he got strong so quickly and he’s still abusing it right now to do multiple tasks learning new things rapidly - that’s gone now going thru with this. Seems like a mistake.

Dragontaylor

Thank you

Jack Nathaniel Mikhail

Was curious about this too, but I agree that makes the most sense. If she had a sharingan it'd be a whole other story, but genjutsu without it never hit like it needed to imo

Thoma Niflheim

Neji's father got sacrificed for the greater good of the Hyuga caln head. (After he saved that head's daughter from kidnapping). In my opinion, if he knows all the truth about the past, he would hate the clan even more.

Grey

U have the most strangest takes...shikamaru a free pass?..bro neji's the only thing keeping his team alive in most cases...his planning along with his shadow jutsu has defeated many strong people including hidden...if anybody he deserves it the most...and he is strong..not the strongest but strong none the less..in addition he is a genius amongst geniuses...he deserves it more than anyone...we don't know what happened with him in the story but we for know all he did in the show...and he deserves it

Kwabena Kumi

imagine if he went on a mission with the belief that he doesn't have to fear enemy ambushes from point A to point B because the road has already been checked. If he is unable to change his mind by noticing any clues then he will end up ignoring them, leading to his team's demise. After all, if he ignores an existence like Guy who metaphorically shouts "neji you're wrong" every time he does a spar, then how can he notice more subtle clues in similar situations?

Antonio Fazio

Observation and deduction skills are the basis of a chunin. And Neji has shown that he has equal to a 4 year old child when he is faced with something that does not correspond to his preconceptions. This problem is not serious at this time. but on a mission it would lead to the death of his companions. Neji must learn to change his mind on his own, not simply change his mind about that single fact

Antonio Fazio

Huh...that's a strange take I don't see why he would be hating on him...this doesn't make any sense..hoka is a hyuga as well and hes much stronger than neji... there's nothing to hate on..his match with naruto is an automatic win for naruto..there's nothing to hate on...there has to be a reason y not jus cuz hating cuz that's so immature...but hes not a child since he transmigrated hes in body not mind

Kwabena Kumi

👆

Yamir

💀💀💀

Yamir

Literally fujin said why during his fight. He simply can't be student of guys and have that idea about destiny and strength.

Antonio Fazio

5 mins

Devil Hex

he's been hating on neji since the qualifiers tbh, doesn't even make sense.

Slade

don't see why he won't get promoted. His flaw is arrogance and uncontrollable hatred for the clan. He meets the strength, intelligence and the mindset aspect of being a chunnin. Meaning he doesn't easily lose composure under pressure. His flaws can easily be fixed by revealing the truth and him spending time with the hyuga clan. Every character has something to work on, All Neji needs is to know the truth, it'll set him right. He's the easiest fix. Shino meets all the requirements and should have passed but politics. Shikamaru lacks strength, he needs the right environment to fight in or he's gonna be in a for a very long fight, team work and strategy is important but he's also gotta get more techniques or improve his strength in case the opponent or mission is overwhelming If they want Neji to be held back to fix his problems which will literally take 3 mins then they all might as well not even be promoted lol. All the leaf candidates should be on a 6 month training period, they all have glaring holes in their game aside from shino and neji (when he's not obsessing over his trauma), give them 6months training and missions with a chunnin team and then promote the 3 obvious ones, Nara, hyuga, shino.

Slade

nejis rotation offsets his wind jutsu so you'd be wrong. Nejis speed and agility offset the jutsu as well. Nejis had all the tools to defend against it. Naruto is the weird one. A normal genin, chunnin and even some jonin wouldn't have the chakra reserves to spam what Naruto spammed. So yes, Neji was prepared but not for an Uzumaki or jinchuriki amount of chakra. If you gonna give shikamaru a free pass then you have to do the same here

Slade

Eta

Fréderic Van Audenhove

Ok, thanks author

Tathagata Das

Yup, almost done. Should start editing soon.

Devil Hex

Hey hex are you ok?

Antonio Fazio

:c

erwin araya

Chakra control stayed her forte even in Shipudden. It's just the Genjutsu which was never explored (though looking at Kurenai, it's understandable). Anyway, I've already shown Sakura being trained in Genjutsu (re-read her fight with Gaara). And, she's just too good with Medical Ninjutsu to not push her in that direction (Fujin might do it if things change). Need to remember she became the best medical ninja after Tsunade. There's no way she scales to such heights in Genjutsu.

Devil Hex

1.5-2h

Devil Hex

Still writing. Around 1.5-2h

Devil Hex

Inject that chapter in my veins

Dark Koro

Hey any news?

kiwwy

ETA?

Lucas Miranda

Unless something else happens for her to suddenly want to grow stronger, she might still be taken on as a student due to her prodigious chakra control, but would be interesting to see her trained by Shizune instead

Kelevra

Read kill the sun. That novel is in a peak at this moment

Antonio Fazio

💀💀💀JJK ending was so 💩💩💩...

Yamir

Can't wait! I'm staying up to wait for the next chapter...

ikkei

He doesn't agree?..hohoho..this is going to be interesting

Kwabena Kumi

LOTM sequel ended and it got a JJK like ending, please save me from despair hex 😭

rain

I think the former as the author tries to keep the fic realistic. I don't think Tsunade has a reason to teach Sakura now if the thing with sasuke does not go as it went

Tathagata Das

@Hex in the original Naruto, Kakashi said that Sakura was talented in Chakra control and gengetsu. Will you focus on that for her or will you go with what Kishimoto did to Sakura.

Qweku_v

I see, I don't know maybe there should be a comma after 'useless'

Tathagata Das

I get the meaning, I just think there is something grammatically wrong

Kelevra

The first sentence means that Fujin did not try to do his age old tactic of declining at first and then agreeing to the request after agrreing to gaining something very useful to him. But here he does not do so with Hiruzen because he considers it to be useless as he is no longer a young ninja who had very promise but already a leader who is terrifyingly strong. Thus, though he will still get useful resources from the village (hiruzen, sannins etc) but now he has to do it in such a way that it is not too excessive i.e. the deal is no longer very favoured towards him.

Tathagata Das

Two words: author note...

Yamir

2 chapters today?

Raghav S

😂😂

Kelevra

nothing, I'm stupid and I didn't read it because I'm not used to reading it with the surname before the name hahahaha

Antonio Fazio

The Hyuga jonin forget/didn’t know that Naruto spam wind jutsu in prem exam against kiba. Neji didn’t feel the need to find counters to that tactic,which was his undoing.

T5p6

theoretically naruto walked over neji and was very smart in the fight with kiba. Of course, he can easily fail because he risked killing Neji and didn't control his jutsu. Which however was not obligatory given that the defense of the spectators was not his responsibility in the slightest. But this does not mean that it is strange that he is not even taken into consideration by the promotion council.

Antonio Fazio

99% sure yeah

Kelevra

The first sentence seems weird, I’m not quite sure what the fix is

Kelevra

What you mean?

Kelevra

Thanks

Qweku_v

Fire 🔥🔥🔥

Yamir

The one who spoke was Fujin, right?

hector lyng

TFTC

hector lyng

Why Naruto isn't there?

Antonio Fazio

Yeeeah i dont think Neji is ready either

Luco

Thanks for the chapter

allen pellissery

Thanks for the chapter

Hibrael Pereira

FIRST 😏

marlo560


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