Amber & Joe
Added 2023-10-28 06:07:58 +0000 UTCThis ended up way longer than I'd planned. This takes place during winter break between arcs. After halloween but before School starts back up.
Comments
Thanks so much for these wonderful pieces. I enjoy them a lot
Bagge
2023-11-09 06:42:18 +0000 UTCJEEZ. Thanks a billion for the writeup. I'm honestly really happy you enjoyed this little story so much.
NottyArt
2023-11-08 08:38:51 +0000 UTCWow. This is good. Really good. Character-wise, you capture both personalities and where they are right now. Amber is jaded and doesn't care to play nice - but even so is mindful to cross a line. Joe is sincere in turning a new leaf and becoming the boyfriend he feels Joyce deserves (which is an entirely other can of worms, but I suppose we will see that play out in the main comic). Also, he's head over heels in love with her. Story-wise, the pacing is great. The mutual teasing, how Joe can stand his own after a while, and the whole tense "will they or won't they"? The fact that a porn comic DOESN'T end with sex but still is really hot is well done. The mutual masturbation scene is hot, and the punch line made me giggle. Honestly, I think teasing Joe is good for Amber's self esteem. I love the art - especially the scenes with Amber resting her legs on Joe. Both very casual and very sexy at the same time. I love how you explore the characters through the lense of casual sex. Really inspired, and brings out a lot of interesting aspects.
Bagge
2023-11-08 05:27:00 +0000 UTC
