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Video 2 - The Major Video (Updated)

Added 2022-05-14 04:51:16 +0000 UTC

Thanks for all the feedback. The video releases in 5 hours. Has 3 extremely tiny mistakes left in it but it will have to do :)

Video 2 - The Major Video (Updated)

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Thanks for all these mate!

2022-05-14 21:08:18 +0000 UTC

Mate that was cracking. It’s 1:22am I thought I would fall asleep during the video and continue watching tomorrow but the flow and overall quality kept me awake and enjoying it. I wish YouTube would speak out and make reaction content be treated the same as music/music videos where it’s has a copyright strike and/or makes it so all profit or proceeds go directly to the original content creator. 10/10 can’t wait to watch all vids on YouTube when they get released. Hope you are doing well.

2022-05-14 15:27:57 +0000 UTC

G’day Matt, apologies for the massive comment there's a fair bit to unpack here. I went into the video very critically looking specifically for errors, clarity issues, conflicts, along with any visually jarring or inconsistent elements. I did find some, but for how few there were, and how minor/inconsequential they were, this video was great, and mostly error free from what I could see. Unfortunately, I have had to remove any of my notes which were just comments about things I liked and would bear no consequence on potential editing, as this would be way too cluttered and annoying to go through with them included. Very beginning: you quote the word “recommendation section” rather than “recommended section” which is the correct quote from Asmongold on screen. At 0:44 the second list item has an unnecessarily capitilised word “creators trying To do”. Additionally, the last list item has a period, but given the item’s meaning, the period feels apt. At 2:00, you say “this process is slowly happening, especially…”. The use of the word ‘slowly’ implies some form of rate – did you mean to say that it is slowly becoming more prevalent? Or maybe I am misunderstanding. At 4:11 (at later at 35:55, I believe it’s the same clip), this scroll speed is likely fine, just personally it was sudden and harsh on my eyes, though I might just have sensitive eyes. This is most likely a personal issue and would require no edits. At 9:51, rows [2,3,4] of the excel sheet have “steam” in column B instead of “stream”. At 12:25, sources for YT video RPM and CTR might be good to list in the description, as they definitely sound reasonable to me (especially since you used your personal RPM for the calcs) but I bet someone somewhere will argue that they get way less, or just say “where’s the source bro” like that somehow disproves your maths. These people shouldn't really warrant attention though. At 17:47 for 3 seconds there is a graphical error with the lower left-hand side of the YouTube logo – rectified at 17:50 during a transition. At 18:04 not quite sure how 1 twitch reaction ends up being 3 YT videos, 2 in addition to the first one which you reference as being the reaction itself. I guess this makes sense if you include clips and surrounding stream content. I’m obviously overanalysing this and misunderstanding so moving on. At 23:14 topic transition, you’ll see at the end of the transition slide, there is a leftover frame, which appears to be one of the basic plain black background and white text transition slides, probably from a previous edit. Definitely something to fix. The arrows drawn at 32:36 just irk me in a weird way, being fuzzy, kind of messy, and maybe even different colours, its hard to tell. Might be better to replace with the recently used arrow style at 32:10? At 38:33, the chroma keying makes your hair levitate a bit, not too bad though, and if recorded with a black wall background like the rest of the video, makes a lot of sense to look like this. Probably not worth the effort to correct this one. Transition slide at 54:07, I think it should be a colon instead of a comma, I could definitely be wrong though. Pacing still matches though for narration and commas look more casual anyway. Transition slide at 57:37, missed capitalisation of Twitch in “twitch viewers”. Transition slide at 1:03:54, every word begins with a capital letter, in contrast to most other title/transition slides where it is regular ‘sentence case’ with only the first word having a capital letter. So just a styling inconsistency here. That's all I found, I cannot emphasise enough how minor most of these are, incredible work, can't wait to see these get released. Again, sorry for the huge comment, all the best. -Chef

2022-05-14 13:08:23 +0000 UTC

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