Supernova 16
Added 2023-12-04 05:54:46 +0000 UTCWelp… here we are. It’s SUCH a relief t
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Primordial Vortex
2025-01-17 20:23:47 +0000 UTCMan, this story was way more fun than expected. Hope the muse clocks you over the head with some inspiration soon! ( ＾ω＾)
Rosy Bramble
2025-01-17 04:14:32 +0000 UTCIt's been 9 months already! Can we please get more chapters for this fanfic 🙏
Shubham Gupta
2024-09-04 22:08:55 +0000 UTCI know that it is up to you and you might already have plan but is it possible for you think of a way to save Merry. I saw a really cool way of doing it in another fanfiction that i love named. "Coby's Choice" by SwordOfTheGods. Just a thought.
Joseph Vargas
2024-05-08 07:54:39 +0000 UTCHorny Jail Hina is just peak comedy xD
Cha0sniper
2024-05-01 22:55:39 +0000 UTCThis is easily my favorite chapter of a story you've written to date, especially for Supernova. The dialogue/crew comedy is amazing, the additions of Tashigi and Hina, working in later reveals in the story earlier in a way that makes sense, honestly just amazing!
Jimmy
2024-05-01 14:36:46 +0000 UTCThat was so good! Really liked Sanji's fruit and the idea of Ifrit Jamble Raptor in late game sounds epic. On the lack of care for Skypiea, I had a thought, Vivi+Gomu Gomu+Haki trans better when stressed and that could make the Enel fight more then Sun BURNS ALL. But then again sun might not work on lightning like that in which case BADASS fight of storm vs sun. No matter what happens I'm sure you'll do great. Keep up the good work😀👍
NoAnime NoLife
2024-03-17 09:55:36 +0000 UTCI think Bellamy is pathetic because despite having a fruit that would basically turn you into a powerhouse, he hasn't made an effort to break the limits and thinks he's a big fucking big shot, so the beating is more than welcome. I wonder what a logia-type fruit would look like when it wakes up. Call it curiosity
savitar
2024-03-09 13:28:05 +0000 UTCYeah rip Bellamy. I thought about it and was like "seriously? Why would doffy waste his time visiting Bellamy? How would he even have known Luffy beat his bitch ass?" and then I was like *_*
Primordial Vortex
2024-03-09 05:50:40 +0000 UTCgods Doffy is going to be furious. That was a fruit that would have earned him an even stronger alliance with Kaido. The truth is that it is difficult to use types in One Piece. Seriously, who is there? Among the Marines, the best is Coby and he would not abandon his ideal of justice. Gods how I wish to see what happens in the future. Hina and Tashigi will be shocked when they see the hellish training. Especially with his interest in using Haki and using Rokushiki. I look forward to the next one
savitar
2024-03-08 20:33:53 +0000 UTCexcellent chapter I really enjoy what you've done so far. I really loved Hina embracing her role as Horny jail. also I'm super excited to see how chopper can help Sanji overclock his devil fruit. all good things so far. I'm so excited for the next installment.
Eli
2024-03-05 22:14:14 +0000 UTCLoving this chapter, though I do have a couple of requests for your consideration. First, Please have JKinbei join in earlier, since Oda mentioned that the reason he joined so late was due to him being significantly stronger than the StrawHats. Second, please consider introducing Bon Clay aka Mr. 2 in some fashion. Luffy and His friendships is honestly one of the cooler relationships in one piece I've seen, and I feel that opportunity was missed with the esscape from Alabasta. Finally, please have Luffy start developing some degree of control over his Conqueror's. Considering the earlier introduction to the cooncepts, it would be nice to see Luffy, Vivi and Zorro get recognition for it by the time they reach Saboady
Tushar Khanna
2024-02-27 22:47:31 +0000 UTChttps://imgur.com/a/8Pq55Mh
Primordial Vortex
2024-02-20 05:15:26 +0000 UTCCan I get a link to Dino sanji?
Kurtis Moxley
2024-02-20 02:45:32 +0000 UTCI haven't really decided on pairings there.
Primordial Vortex
2024-02-07 23:42:56 +0000 UTCPoor Tashigi and Hina! To be betrayed like that, but then again this IS the World Government were talking about here doing stuff like this is an everyday concurrent with them, but still I'm happy they joined up with the Straw Hats so will Hina be paired with Luffy and Zoro for Tashigi?
Zero Shadow
2024-02-04 18:55:16 +0000 UTCI have genuinely never read a fanfic that can make the entirety of skypeia interesting (and i love skypeia) so if you cant find the best way to write a scene that appeals to you, id recommend just skimming over it and telling us very little changed because this fic is too good to get trapped in the skypeia writers block like most other fics. Ill cry lmao.
Tyler
2024-01-13 12:08:10 +0000 UTCI really hope that your muse holds out. These last chapters were just a beautiful combination of shockingly brutal and brutally epic.
Landrogar
2023-12-21 14:06:35 +0000 UTCMan this chapter is just going to blow up the TVTropes page when it goes public. We got what, Pyrrhic Victory, Godzilla Threshold, Mistreatment Induced Betrayal, Heel-Face Turn, Wrecked Weapon, modification to Normal Fish in a Tiny Pond and Curb Stomp Battle, Failed a Spot Check, Mood Whiplash (multiple times), Fatal Flaw, Dying to Be Replaced and god knows what else.
Zaiaku
2023-12-07 18:14:16 +0000 UTCHopefully with his new DF he’ll be okay with using Shigan now, most likely with the main claw on his feet when in animal/hybrid form. Maybe even use a style similar to Jabra’s.
Jon
2023-12-07 05:38:42 +0000 UTCI was cackling like a madman as I wrote it. Honestly, I'm glad my friends talked me out of my *original* way to have him eat it.... which was the girls forcing it down his throat when he revealed he wanted the invis fruit. LOL
Primordial Vortex
2023-12-07 05:00:05 +0000 UTCThey'll be fine dude just punch the water out of the way. ggez
Primordial Vortex
2023-12-07 04:58:54 +0000 UTCNo Bacarrat. I usually don't pull from movies and such, and because stacking is already happening lol
Primordial Vortex
2023-12-07 04:58:22 +0000 UTCSO I decided to have Hina and Tashigi HERE because it made the most sense. It's closeish to alabasta. There's no marine presence. and they can go drown their sorrows out. There were other options later, but I just felt like this one was the best. That fanart is so fire. At least I think I now have a good setup for flashbacks that don't change anything!
Primordial Vortex
2023-12-07 04:57:18 +0000 UTCWhen I made the decision to have him eat that fruit, It was like the clouds opened up and told me "Beat his ass, young midoriya."
Primordial Vortex
2023-12-07 04:53:55 +0000 UTCKek she's loving it
Primordial Vortex
2023-12-07 04:44:39 +0000 UTCI honestly thought for a moment that Sanji was gonna get his dream DF for a moment there.😂 Super excited that they’re finally making it to Skypeia, the battle between Luffy and Enel is gonna be epic.
Jon
2023-12-04 22:24:15 +0000 UTCThey are all gonna drown without some more people that can swim
Kurtis Moxley
2023-12-04 17:14:02 +0000 UTCHoly!!! Sanji is gonna get so busted. He should now be able to body Lucci with his new fruit. And on top of a stronger hybrid form, since dinosaur and ancient zoans give a better stat boost, is that he has Zoan durability and healing. He'll get better gains from training and is more durable. Diable Jambe depends on his own defence for how hot he can potentially get it. So with this and Haki training, he should be able to use Iffrit Jambre in like 1 if not 2 years. Then add his Germa enhancements on top of that and Sanji is gonna be the absolutely tankiest monster out there. Only rivaled by freaks of nature like Kaido and Big Mom. So, this chapter means that Ace doesn't get captured. Hell, even if not Blackbeard, some if his crewmates like the sick guy definitely died. They'll be Injured. Ace is gonna body them. Especialy if he learn he tried to kill Luffy. So no Impel Down or Marineford arcs. Jimbe remains free and might join the crew later anyways. And this much stronger crew may very well break the buster call. My guess is that they beat CP9 at Water 7. Extra Catharsis if Robin beats Lucci. Somehow. Then Spandam or the defeated CP9 call down the Buster Call on Water 7. And the whole city gets to witness the Strawhats defending their city after destroying the water wave. 8 Vice Admirals, I think. Luffy might be able to take the strongest they send. And Sanji and Zoro get one each. Vivi, Valentine and Nami share another. Tashigi and Hina might share their weakest one. Robin Might beat another. The whole Franky Family and Galley La Might beat another weak one. And maybe Ussop beats another through the mother of all tricky/strategic battles. Then they bust the ships. And Robin properly Kills Spandam this time. Their bounties will be stupid by the time Sabaody comes around.
Néstor Rocha
2023-12-04 17:07:55 +0000 UTCA lot of things happened this chapter. We got Bellamy shit kicked in, Hina and Tashigi joining, Sanji Devil fruit and bigger bounties, but all I’m focusing on is the repeated mentions of the Luck Luck fruit and wondering if best girl Backaratt will be joining. God she was wasted for just one movie. Other than that great chap Vortex. Can’t wait for the next one!
Loghead101
2023-12-04 16:46:04 +0000 UTCWell, this was a great way to start my day and my week xD First thing first, I wasn't expecting to see Hina and Tashigi so soon after what happened at the end of the previous chapter! It was a good surprise, even if it can feel it's a little too soon IMO. That aside, while I've seen Hina as an ally for the StrawHats before, I think this is the first time I see Hina outright becoming part of the crew!! I'm really looking forwards to it!!! (And obviously, also to the Marine's reaction to their fucked up with Smoker and Tashigi since they went full into Self-fulfilling Prophecy territory there xd) Utahsaurus Sanji? *Chef's kiss* I just saw the fanart and I can understand the hype and why you went for it!! Hell, considering dinosaur Zoan extra physical resilience he could start using his arms and hands in his fight style, or hell, just train it and keep it as a hidden ace! Sudden claw in fire to the face! And that isn't even considering how it could synergy in combination with Haki and the Rokushiki! Really looking forwards to how this development will affect Sanji's training and techniques~ Now... Skypiea is an arc that I'm really fond of... even if the flashbacks were a pain x'D looking forwards to how you're gonna write it up! And really hoping you'll keep changing stuff! Thank you for the chapter! It was pretty damn awesome!!
Reiter
2023-12-04 14:14:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, I know Skypea tends to drag a bit but taking into account the modified skills sets of the crew it should hopefully speed up some of the plot points considering most of the enemies will be no real challenge for the main fighters.
Codeninja676 (Brian)
2023-12-04 14:04:49 +0000 UTCDon't forget Chopper's running gag.
Zaiaku
2023-12-04 10:19:32 +0000 UTCFast forward to Aokiji Usopp: "Shouldn't he be chasing some billion beri bounty?!" Sanji: "Technically, we're a billion beri bounty."
TheSinful
2023-12-04 10:04:29 +0000 UTCHe didn't. Neither Chopper nor Usopp currently have bounties.
TheSinful
2023-12-04 10:03:17 +0000 UTCSorry to bring this up but I think you forgot about chopper’s bounty
Esteban Gonzalez
2023-12-04 08:16:45 +0000 UTCThis was such a great chapter!! Feels like I just read the previous chapter and now this comes out! Love the changes you’ve made, from adding Tashigi and Hina to the crew, to having the early reveals of Sky Island being once part of Jaya along with a surprise spoil of Sanji’s hidden background, not to mention the Dino fruit Sanji ate (no invisible man powers for him!). Thanks for the awesome post and hope the momentum continues well through the Sky Island arc to Water 7 and beyond.
Flbiv
2023-12-04 07:53:42 +0000 UTCI don’t have words to describe how freakin’ excited I am to see this!!! Sanji’s bounty poster and the crew’s reaction had me fearing for my ribs but him eating the wrong devil fruit and the girls literally taking turns beating on him damn near had me on the ground. Hina and Tashigi joining up wasn’t unexpected but I was a bit surprised to see it happen so soon. I’m actually a bit eager for the inevitable meeting between the Strawhats and Garp. I can’t imagine he will take their reason for leaving very well. Either way Sun vs. Lightning is coming up and I am so freaking STOKED!!! Keep up the great work, friend.
Sin Hunter
2023-12-04 07:18:29 +0000 UTCWasn't expecting Sanji to get a Devil Fruit, but that was hilarious!
Calvin Morris
2023-12-04 07:07:29 +0000 UTCValerie over here having the best time enjoying the antics of everyone she’s literally like us some from the outside looking in at their craziness 😂
Esteban Gonzalez
2023-12-04 06:58:15 +0000 UTCgod fucking amazing!
Gilorad
2023-12-04 06:32:31 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
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2023-12-04 06:27:35 +0000 UTC
