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Supernova 15

On a roll and I hope it keeps ON rollin

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I'm like hina and Tashigi, I want blood

Zenkichi

They do not lol.

Primordial Vortex

Oh shit I just realized- do they have Onigumo's Devil Fruit on the ship or did it reincarnate into one of the Marine ships?

MasterMarx

I was so busy that it took 4 weeks for me to get to this. I must admit it's really rare to see a Tashigi goes turn coat (I refuse the term traitor, because the organization has to be worthy of loyalty first). And though the response was way over exaggerated, I can definitely see the world government fuckwads doing that. Something tells me Old Budda is going to go gray long before the timeskip.

Zaiaku

I enjoyed this whole story. This chapter especially. But the Omake is icing on the cake. Imaging the expressions on Crocodile's face as his aspirations come crashing down after learning that. Then that joke at the end. It was all hilarious.

Ryu Maroku

Yeah, idk that it would even happen. I feel like Cobra was being a bit of an idiot even asking.

Primordial Vortex

If PV doesn’t do anything to butterfly that meeting away, I’m honestly not sure he has any hope of surviving. Even if he manages to master his fruit and all three forms of Haki including Haoshoku Infusion, I’m not sure he could handle all five Elder Stars plus Im. He’d put up one hell of a fight and might even make it hard if not impossible to cover up, but I don’t know he could survive. And I honestly don’t think he has enough time to fully master all of those given he also has his duties as a king. Granted PV is likely going to change enough it might not even happen and even if he doesn’t that’s so far in the future it’ll literally be years before we get to it even if PV updated this fic every month till then.

Kaminoryu

That omake at the end *slew* me 🤣🤣🤣

Cha0sniper

If you can't make fun fights, make them ridiculous. That wss the best part about that arc anyways.

Kurtis Moxley

Well I am so happy to dumped Canon on its head. This is going to be an amazing ride. Dead vice admirals, dead smoker and I Vivi with no sand fruit. I am stoked. If cobra trains hard maybe he won't get killed later in the series.

M wilbur

I know that's rhetorical, but I'm betting Jaya outright. Whether it's to catch up to and try to join the Straw Hats or to look for other inroads into the big Pirate crews.

MasterMarx

Mood, it didn't even show up on my notifs. It's good shit tho innit?

MasterMarx

Sadly, I'm not too sure I'm going to manage much of anything fun in Skypiea outside of maybe Luffy vs Enel.

Primordial Vortex

Bro I'm really fucking pissed off. Did they change a fucking setting or something?

Primordial Vortex

Bro I'm really fucking pissed off. Did they change a fucking setting or something? Yeah, guess where she and Hina are going to be next chapter? :kek:

Primordial Vortex

I'm so confused about the fact that I *didn't get an email* for this. F in the chat for Smoker... Tashigi's not gonna let that lie tho, so I hope she goes Pirate.

MasterMarx

Trying to figure out how I missed this being updated on Monday and only finding out today.

Kurtis Moxley

No worries still excited XD

Jonathan Santiago

Robin best girl. Yeah, F's for Smoker. I'm not skipping skypiea. I need it, unfortunately. lol

Primordial Vortex

I am so freakin’ stoked for the Skypeia arc!! Lightning vs. the sun in a battle of absolutely epic proportions. With your talent for writing, I have great expectations for the future. Sad about Smoker but you weren’t wrong about him in canon and I’m honestly intrigued about Tashigi’s and Hina’s futures from this point and finally I am happy as a clam to see Robin joining Luffy’s love fest. Eager as Hell for the next chapter.

Sin Hunter

That was funny XD. I am said Smoker died but it was still a good read. You are not wrong Smoker did not do a whole lot even in the time skip. I am curious if you are going to skip the Skypeia arc or go straight to Water 7. I am also curious if Tashigi will become a pirate after this or move to work under Garp. Either way I am excited to see where you take this and as a side note yay Robin is in the harem...she needs a lot of love

Jonathan Santiago

I actually never played that game. Iirc I didn't have the console for it. I did play 1 and 2 tho.

Primordial Vortex

I most definitely have a fruit planned for vivi. It's been planned right from the start.

Primordial Vortex

Actually it’s entirely possible she won’t get one. Pretty sure PV has plans for one or two members who don’t have one in canon, though not sure which fruits, and I know he doesn’t want to over saturate the crew with DF users for multiple reasons. So if he can’t find one he likes for her or thinks he can make her strong without it he won’t bother with a fruit.

Kaminoryu

I want to know as well when it comes to vivi because there’s no way she’s not gonna get a DF

Esteban Gonzalez

Damn, that was some good shit. Sad about Smoker, but it does make sense and will allow for some character growth for Hina and Tashigi. I do wonder how the eventual confrontation with Aokiji will go. If he’ll believe the Marine story or actually ask for Tashigi’s side given he considered Smoker a friend. Also, ngl I did not see Cobra and the Suna Suna or the Rokushiki coming. Wonder if you have any ideas for Chaka’s fruit? Maybe Kohza as a form of repentance? Eh, probably doesn’t matter. Nice to see Robin officially join the Polycule as well. And fuck, did I love seeing Doberman and Onigumo die, even if I hated how much damage they did. Nice to see you using the Sanji/Pudding joke. Even if that’s a long ways off. Unless you fuck more of canon that is. Out of curiousity, did you have a DF planned for Vivi or is she just gonna become a badass with Haki and maybe some kind of weapon?

Kaminoryu

I’m a little sad that smoker is dead, but seeing as tashigi has the smoke fruit, will she use moves from Delsan Rowe from infamous second son? I only ask because I this infamous second son had some really creative ways on how to use smoke powers

Duke

Surprise ending: Lili carved the message herself and pressed her ass against the poneglyph to make sure the carving was perfectly accurate

TheSinful

Less eventually and more "Now". The truest reason why Smoker was killed in-universe is that he's not toeing the party line and is tying up a valuable logia while doing so (possibly the weakest logia but still a logia). Were either of those not true, they wouldn't care enough to kill him.

TheSinful

I see the corruption of the WG is leaking further into the Marines if they're so willing to off their own like this. I imagine Hina and Tashigi might find themselves attempting to abandon ship eventually, but that's just my thought process.

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara

Well this was unexpected circumstance after unexpected circumstance... with one expected outcome in the middle. Loved it and can't wait for more, though I will gladly do so anyway

Kyros_Vasera