Valyrian Jon
Added 2024-10-01 04:01:02 +0000 UTC
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Main Character: Acquire brains Authors: Wait, that's illegal
Primordial Vortex
2025-10-14 06:33:26 +0000 UTCDamn good plot bunny you have here PV. Kinda wish you'd continue it or another AsoIaF story ive had a bug for it for quite awhile now. the Tyr story is also very good but somn about Jon just being Jon but smarter than Canon scratches it just right. Funny thought that the MC being even marginally smarter than Canon MC fixes a lot of problems in A LOT of stories.
Ryuu
2025-10-03 06:07:03 +0000 UTCOK, I know I’m late to the party, but please continue the story. There are not many stories where John is not only strong but intelligent and he wants it like he got damned owns it. also, I love a good story where Katelyn Stark is called out for her bullshit because even with everything that happened leading up to the rebellion without her actions against John and her attitude reinforcing Ned’s belief that no one will ever accept. John did half this shit in the series would not have gone left the way it did.
Ant Franklin
2025-04-09 17:26:52 +0000 UTCHuh, not bad, assuming there'd be quite a bit of extra world building to rearrange A LOT. Looks fun ☺️
Orchamus
2024-11-03 02:28:52 +0000 UTCI swear I read one with a plot like that. It must have just been a similar one
M wilbur
2024-10-02 09:08:43 +0000 UTCReally? Where did it diverge from your expectations? It's simple: we kill the Lorch. Yeah, Stannis won't bend the knee. At least I don't think he would, even with a dragon in his face.
Primordial Vortex
2024-10-02 00:47:49 +0000 UTCIt's not. it wasn't ready.
Primordial Vortex
2024-10-02 00:46:50 +0000 UTCLmao, that last line! Poor Ancalagon xD
Cha0sniper
2024-10-01 20:53:21 +0000 UTCWhere is that one posted I would love to read it again
M wilbur
2024-10-01 20:50:08 +0000 UTCMan I am loving that the GOT/ASOIF bit you. These are better then so many op Jon's because you do it in a way that is funny and serious at the same time. You expect Jon to be strong but you make him cautious and not just a fuck everything in his way character
M wilbur
2024-10-01 20:45:45 +0000 UTCMan, this story went in several different directions than I expected.. everytime I think I got where you were going, Nope! Turned it around. Really loved that Lorch scene - he tends to get away with it a lot more in stories compared to The Mountain. Probably because the Mountain is much more memorable, but still. Also really liked Arya being his squire - I've always loved their relationship, but rarely will you ever read a story that addresses it. Shame about Stannis, but it would take some real hard work or out of character thoughts for him not to follow his duty and proclaim himself King.. Still, was a fun read!
DarthGhengis
2024-10-01 19:44:23 +0000 UTCSad the muse left that story to die but at least we got this one, great chapter hope we see more of this and the Tyr one in the future.
Codeninja676 (Brian)
2024-10-01 17:13:07 +0000 UTCOk didn't know that but that sounds like an awesome storyline.
Castermaster7
2024-10-01 04:48:42 +0000 UTCThat was House of the Dragonborn. Jon got sent to Skyrim after they killed him at the wall and then he ended up before the Dance after. For obvious reasons. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Just didn't manage to finish it before the muse dried up.
Primordial Vortex
2024-10-01 04:47:49 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter and I like it honestly I thought it was going to be a jon gets transported to skyrim story but this is great as well although I also would've enjoyed more details on the fourteen flames in regards to like what kind of gods they are like kratos being the god of war, if you have any idea for that with giving them titles please that would be awesome otherwise great story idea and thanks for all the Awesome stories you create. God bless you and I hope you have a great week.
Castermaster7
2024-10-01 04:46:24 +0000 UTC
