Legend of the Monkey God Ch 4
Added 2024-04-26 02:46:45 +0000 UTCStill can’t really believe Toriyama is
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That's actually the canon explanation lol
Primordial Vortex
2024-04-27 22:48:06 +0000 UTCWhat a fantastic chapter. :-) I'm very much looking forward to some of the slice of life now that kefla is involved. I'm assuming the growth spurt will be soon too since you made the notice of Goku getting hard when Bulma and him were fighting.
Orchamus
2024-04-27 20:03:01 +0000 UTCNew chapter is awesome, and I love the explanation on why Master Roshi is the only Z fighter that doesn’t fly when anyone can learn how if they have Ki.
Jon
2024-04-27 17:16:42 +0000 UTCRe: Razer's QC issues: I had a similar problem, I've basically completely given up on mechanical switches for mice that I use because they just don't last long enough. I'm too hard on them. My current mouse uses optical switches for the buttons, so the only mechanical parts in the mouse are the mechanism that physically allows the buttons to click. I assume that'll eventually wear out, but the optical switches themselves will probably die first tbh. Only downside is that it's still a Razer mouse, but I'm sure they aren't the only ones who had the idea.
Cha0sniper
2024-04-27 00:32:25 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
MASTERCHEIF1229 .
2024-04-26 17:45:16 +0000 UTCI love these types of dragon ball stories, it's a shame there are so few of them. First...a minute of silence in honor of Akira Toriyama. for bringing us such a wonderful universe Having a shitty keyboard happens more than you can believe, although if you are looking for quality and not looking for games Microsoft is one of the best The fights were phenomenal. I think that with Goku knowing that his father was stronger than him and knowing that his father had to work for someone, he is very clear about the fact that he must work his ass off to train. I think the next chapter should be a mix. On the one hand, Kefla's training accompanied by her new friends. Let's be honest, Roshi's training can be done as much as you want as long as you add more weight. I think you could use what Kairomaru did in his as the reason for Kefla's arrival. Only instead of sending two female Saiyanjin I use the genetic templates of two of the strongest and merge them into one but giving it the appearance of a 7 Saiyan universe Also spending more time with the Brief family wouldn't be bad. keep it up you are incredible
savitar
2024-04-26 06:48:53 +0000 UTCYou have no idea how much I have longed for you to write this chapter. It's always such a joy to see a notification that you updated a story because I have never been dissappointed by anything you write. As to the four months: I don't think anyone would be cross with you if you did another small training montage if you don't have anything sub-arc or romance-wise to fill in... I just wanted to suggest to take a bit of inspiration from the manga but I just checked and noticed that they basically glossed over the fact that it has only been 8 months and still Goku uses the dragon radar to go find the Dragonballs. But maybe you could let them do a bit of traveling? Let them see the world? Have a few mini adventures. I'm sure you can come up with something wholesome and entertaining.
Landrogar
2024-04-26 06:34:07 +0000 UTCAhh I see, I personally don't go for silent keyboards for work because the sound helps sell that I'm working when on a call and stops people from asking are you still there every 30 seconds. Asus is a generally good brand as well I prefer Corsair for quality and the keys clickty clack noises.
Codeninja676 (Brian)
2024-04-26 05:14:50 +0000 UTCI'm probably going to go with that new Asus keyboard. I wanted to get a Corsair again (had one for years) but the one I had my eye on is a pretty old model and I was hoping for something quieter/hotswappable, neither of which you can do
Primordial Vortex
2024-04-26 04:47:01 +0000 UTCi love this series!
Gilorad
2024-04-26 04:17:20 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, can't wait for how this develops, also the 4 months leading up to the RR army arc could be filled with a training/relationship building arc I can see lots of potential for the magic martial arts stuff and the induction of Kefla into the crew. Unrelated but relevant If you need a new keyboard definitely go for Corsair if you must have a gaming keyboard with macro keys, otherwise go for Microsoft or Logitech. I say this as an IT specialist who has to write a fuck ton of stuff on the daily
Codeninja676 (Brian)
2024-04-26 04:06:41 +0000 UTCNo, she's natively a saiyan from this universe. That's actually not a bad idea!
Primordial Vortex
2024-04-26 03:39:24 +0000 UTCThank you so much for this chapter! I reread this story a while ago and was surprised to find the notification about this update. Excellent chapter, and Goku and Bulma still have that explanation about the moon to give to Kefla. As for what to do in the 4 months before the next hunt for the dragon balls, you could focus on training using tech from the Attack Pod? Maybe learn more about how Kefla came to earth and if she had an Attack Pod as well? Though since she’s originally from another Universe, not sure if shenanigans are in play that pulled her to this Universe, or just that she’s now natively from this Universe for your story. Can’t wait to read more of this and your other stories! Thanks again!!
Flbiv
2024-04-26 03:31:35 +0000 UTCThis story was started long before I made a patreon. They're on both Ao3 and FF.net
Primordial Vortex
2024-04-26 03:07:44 +0000 UTCso i want to read this but i have no idea of where chap 1 and 2 are so im kinda lost
Eragon Gravelyn
2024-04-26 03:04:13 +0000 UTC
