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Brutal legends: Decapitation was going thru my head fuck now I'm crack whore addicted to this

ShadowAndrew93

For some reason the term fuck around fits this chapter well. Given the next chapter is the find out phase

Loki-BeastRuler

Would like for more chapters for this fanfic

Shubham Gupta

I kinda doubt it for the same reason I doubt Nemu's gonna join the harem: TheSinful already did that in Vow of the King, and PV seems to intensely dislike treading old ground lol

Cha0sniper

I can't wait for more! Ichigo vs Kenpachi is a must!

Oda The Toaster

Nope. I know nothing of it and frankly, what little of Kubo's works I've seen post the ending of Bleach don't give me ANY interest.

Primordial Vortex

Reread the whole story again up to here and it’s got me wondering something, if you’ll even drop spoilers like. Is Burn The Witch gonna be referenced or used at all, given that it is connected to Bleach conanically?

carson lukes

Kukaku was not one of the ones I was considering.

Primordial Vortex

I remember back in the 1st chapter you said for the harem you won't have vanilla girls. Since we're already getting to that part of the story could you add Kukaku? Not only is she one of the most attractive characters but she's about as far away from vanilla as you can get. As for the whole family thing, it was said that Isshin was leader of the branch family, not the main family which Kukaku is from so they're not even cousins just very distantly related. Also if we could have Kukaku get her arm back due to Orihime that'd be cool. But yeah, so far so good. If you had higher tier I wouldn't mind pledging more if it meant more consistent updates for this story.

NXE092015

Not saying you have to add her just saying that Ichigos presence could reawaken her desire to fight

Jeremie

Yes, out of the question. Idk about Retsu. She wasn't really on my list.

Primordial Vortex

you don't really need Zaraki to be genderbent for a strong and blood thirsty opponent hunting Ichigo to fight/bang. Afterall the ORIGINAL Kenpachi was Retsu so basically all PV needs to do is make her revert to her bloodthirsty criminal days

Jeremie

hmm if I remember correctly you DON'T like Rukia or at least not the idea of her being with Ichigo so adding her to the harem is out of the question isn't it? Meh oh well would like to see that as I like Rukia but no big deal lol. I honestly can't wait for the meeting between Ichigo and Retsu as I have a feeling something about him is going to reawaken her long buried Yachiru side lol

Jeremie

Oh man I am loving this story. I can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded and really am looking forward to the meeting between Ichigo and Kukaku and Ganju, especially since he now knows they are family. Also here before the post, betting that Kukaku goes to kick Isshin's ass six ways to Sunday.

Benjamin Bravo

Black and Blue by Aurora313, it's on FF.net the Lisa plays a decently bigger role though she's not a full in MC

Codeninja676 (Brian)

What’s the other bleach fanfic ?

HugoH

Oof, three weeks later xD it was in one of the novels, let me see *-several hours after-* Alright, Can't Fear Your Own World, Vol 2 (fan-translated by u/missstormcaller, u/scheneizel and u/shadowliepard) [...Tokinada was silent for a while, then eventually put on a sarcastic smile and let escape a loud sigh. “So Yoruichi Shihoin, who holds no zanpaku-to, and the ninth generation of the Fon family, who specializes in martial arts. I see, I see. It seems that you’ve heard of my zanpaku-to’s ability from Kyoraku, that chatterbox.” “How rude. I’ve got my own zanpaku-to. It’s just that I’m much stronger at fighting in combat. That’s why soothing my sulking sword is part of my daily routine.” Ms. Yoruichi comforts her zanpaku-to every day? Imagining that, Soi Fon felt terrific jealousy for Yoruichi’s zanpaku-to, even as she remained vigilant around Tokinada and would not say such a thing out loud...]

Reiter

Totally fair, I was just hoping the temptation of getting paid for writing a chapter without anyone's input would have your muse pull over and consider it. Double kek. Also I will tempt you, put up a 25$ tier. YOU WONT, NO BA-.... Anyway. >;]

Shura

Tell me that you will at least change his zampakuto for something more useful. I think you have to remember that after the war with the quincy she was considered a captain so obviously she is strong

savitar

Lisa so fucking underrated

Primordial Vortex

Don't tempt me :kek:

Primordial Vortex

I don't write commissions because my muse is a crackwhore and only allows me to write what she wants, lol

Primordial Vortex

Also, side note; even if it gets nothing extra, if you made a 15 or 20$ tier I would sign up for that immediately. Everything you do is QUALITY.

Shura

Ya know, most people who don't take commissions don't do so because they want to write what they want to write, or due to the pressure. HOWEVER , I have to ask, if someone were to bribe (with a definitely-not-comission fee) for another chapter of this, would you do it? I need moooooore! Half jokes aside, I fucking love your stories. There isn't enough Rangiku/Ichigo out there. Looking forward to more, stay awesome, my dude.

Shura

Finally saw that you had a patreon, been following a couple of yours for a bit!

Curious_Corvid

there isnt one. i'm not a regular lemon writer

Primordial Vortex

where's the lemon? lol awesome ch looking forward to moar

H Meister

First of all: there are no words to say how incredible this story is. There are not enough words believe me Second. Lisa, Yoruichi and Rangiku hahahahaha you are giving the guy a lot of perverts. Could restart the shiba clan and produce an army of captain level children Third: yes fuck yes. fuck Tosen god you don't know how much he hated him and his damn way of talking about following the path with less blood do you have problems with the nobles? then fucking kill them And Fourth: gods everyone's face if Ichigo is seen in front of Yamamoto. It's still a while away but I think Yamamaoto has found his successor. Gods the plow of all idiots so Ichigo is worth it

savitar

I absolutely *love* Ichigo giving Hiyori and Shinji grief over bickering like an old married couple xD its the best dynamic in the world lmao

Cha0sniper

That’s on me, I think I got this story mixed up with a different one I was reading when this one started, but I definitely can’t wait for when Kenpachi and Ichigo go toe to toe, it’s gonna be an epic all out brawl.

Jon

She is by far my favorite Vizard and I love how this and another of my favorite ongoing Bleach fanfics are implementing her.

Codeninja676 (Brian)

I'm pretty sure the yoruichi thing was a non-canon thing. The only time I can recall seeing her with one was in the flashback to when she was really young.

Primordial Vortex

Lisa is like one of the most underfuckingutilized girls in the entire series she's so damn got

Primordial Vortex

Some interesting ideas! Glad you enjoyed, and I've been wanting to write the panty flash scene since either Sal or Sin made a comment for it LOL

Primordial Vortex

I'm the wroooong author to be hoping for genderbending from.

Primordial Vortex

…Oh god, Ichigo and company are going to be absolute monsters by the time they arrive in Soul Society. And I CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT TO HAPPEN!!

Raizor

Love the chapters and the twist to the story you added. Can’t wait for the next one, and when we finally get Ichigo V. Kenpachi. Gotta be honest though I was kinda hoping for genderbent Kenpachi, I think it would’ve been hilarious for em to hunt down Ichigo all the time looking to bang/fight.

Jon

Yaaas! Lisa has joined the party! :D And the harem, it sounds like xD

Cha0sniper

Mid way through the rant with tōsen I was like 'what the fuck is ichigo's bankai going to be like' so there's more anticipation there from me amazing chapter can't wait for the next one

J~ToT~O~ToT~S~ToT~E

Oh boy, Aizen is gonna love and hate this serie of unexpected developments x'D still, love the chapter! Ran and Ichigo together are adorable and I'm fine with that fade-to-black scene, cause the mood would've been a little too bittersweet. Still, really looking forward to Ran-chan next scene, it will be pretty interesting to see the reactions to her return from her or Toshirou's POV. On the Yoruichi's front, I may be misremembering it, but AFAIK she actually has her blade with her in the human world, the problem is that it clashes pretty hard with her fight style and she actually spends some daily time appeasing it since she hasn't fought with it in ages. Though honestly, it's something that can be handwaved as an AU element. Lisa's good civilization! And man, Ichigo has a type and I'm all for it~

Reiter

“‘Panty-Flash’ assumes there are panties to be flashed!” He pointed at her, an intense look on his face. this had me rolling on the floor :D Well done, looking forward to the next chapter :D

Darashon

Crap! Whoever's comment I just deleted: My bad! I meant to edit my comment and patreon sucks! Didn't realize! And no, there's no seggs. I've gotta be in a very particular mood to write those and it just wasn't hitting.

Primordial Vortex

Goddamn great chapter and I do love me the female megane pervert character so im 1000% in on Lisa being here to stay. And the Shikai, Bankai theory makes sense in canon we see this multiple times, even Toshiro which at this point we believe to just me the same but more ice, his Bankai evolves to fit the theory later on once he mentally matures and accepts it properly.

Codeninja676 (Brian)

God this whole chapter was fucking amazing. I honestly can’t think of a single part I didn’t love. The humor with the ‘old married couple’ of Hiyori and Shinji, along with Lisa showing off more than she realized at first, had me near busting a gut. Also nice to see Ichigo and Rangiku having their first time, even off screen. And the scene with Yamamoto and the other senior captains showing their experience and knowing something felt off was nice as well. Can’t wait to see how that turns out, especially with Kyouraku likely to meet Lisa at some point. And the scene with Hisagi and Tosen was amazing as well. Always nice to see Hisagi have his idiocy pointed out to him. And seeing Tosen get wrecked emotionally, physically, and mentally was just utter perfection. Also nice to see you mentioning Urahara planning the whole time travel thing instead of it just being random luck. And I can’t wait to see what you have planned for the things the non Ichigo characters have learned. My guess for Chad based on what you mentioned of his thoughts is possibly some kind of reiryoku draining ability. Not sure if specifics but it would both weaken his opponents while simultaneously strengthening/healing him. Of course knowing you it could be something entirely different like the mouth or whatever on his shield arm, he could just eat any attack that makes contact. Even if it doesn’t restore him, it would still be interesting and allow him to be an even better tank. Anywho, I’m looking forward to whenever you get to the next chapter.

Kaminoryu