The Last Remnants of The Great Sage
Added 2023-02-01 05:35:16 +0000 UTCLong Authors Notes incoming!!!! (Sa
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It's uhhhh.... not really a resurgence, lol. This was written an unfinished years ago. Yeah, I always hated fanon sasuke, and didn't want the same in my fic when I was writing it. And I don't mind spoiling since it's not like I'm writing it. Hiruzen was going to survive and take sasuke as his apprentice during his retirement. Yeah, moon babe was hot but she can go fuck herself.
Primordial Vortex
2023-03-04 15:25:46 +0000 UTCI'm glad this a abandoned series is getting a resurgence even if updates are going to be rare and far between. I love what you've been doing with the characters Naruto is great genuine good and understanding despite the rudeness, him being powerful and reliable just makes him even better, I'm really happy Sasuke is not either a punching bag or an absolute ass like every other fic makes him out to be him facing his issues makes us endeared to him and if he does turn coat due to Itachi and Orochimaru it makes it actually feel like a friend fell to the dark side instead of just predictable actions of a moody edgelord, same with Sakura her having an unique ability that's not just a random elemental bloodline and not being just a stereotype fangirl is a breath of fresh air, her personality actually showing up early hope missing the really stupid moves Kishimoto pulled with her later on (Seriously the fake confession to manipulate Naruto actually made me drop the series for a couple of years). Great fun writing and if you decide to say fuck canon with a giant knife on the Alien Ninja from Konoha hills bullshit from the end of the series I'm 10000% for it, Madara should have been the final big bad we did not need alien virus ninja with freaky eyes that whole thing could be removed and the story would still be good, I like Space Milf's design but everything involving her return and the consequence of her being a thing was horrible, the Otsutsuki clan in general being planet eaters from other dimension was plain bad, hell making them just people from the moon would have been better with them eventually just turning into another group of humans when they moved to earth and interbred leaving only behind stories and legends as the clan itself ended up absorbed into every clan that ended up with Bloodline limits.
Codeninja676 (Brian)
2023-03-04 12:24:14 +0000 UTC
