Mass Effect ch2
Added 2023-04-01 04:15:22 +0000 UTCHey everyone! Was able to bang out chap
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Lemme guess, Miranda tried to create her own version of the Lohengrin particle cannon from Gundam Seed, didn't she? XD
Cha0sniper
2025-08-04 18:47:34 +0000 UTCIf you have plans to have them make it more awesome then it is I'd be incapable of waiting I think
J~ToT~O~ToT~S~ToT~E
2023-04-07 05:59:10 +0000 UTCYup, that's it. That's fucking *standard* on Federation ships.
Primordial Vortex
2023-04-07 05:50:16 +0000 UTCLate to read but great chapter and oh my God the MHD cannon is it the same tech the reapers have that humanity unknowingly recreated or am I freaking out for no reason. Either way I'm fucking excited!
J~ToT~O~ToT~S~ToT~E
2023-04-07 05:43:28 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter!!! More and more you introduce new variables and make exciting changes to what’s expected from canon. You have a human/quarian/geth alliance with a major growth in technology and AI thanks to this. We get a couple of familiar faces quite early in the form of Tali and Legion. And surprises abound upon the Eden Prime mission! Batarians firmly on the side of the reapers, discovery of the rogue “heretic” geth and early reveal of the giant enemy ship is in fact a giant AI robo cuttlefish. Also the early warning of indoctrination thanks to EDI which will be an immense game changer!! Can’t wait to read the next chapter as we’ll see the Citadel faction is like in this universe, especially with early proof of the reapers, an intact beacon, and some last minute audio footage of Saren and Nhilus before the betrayal. Along with the burn marks from the up close shot which points to Nhilus letting his guard down, this will make Saren’s defense a lot more difficult. Great work and hope to read more!!
Flbiv
2023-04-01 07:00:12 +0000 UTC.... I made I derp. I thought it said something else and forgot that you didn't have the Quarians freak the fuck out, or at least had the ones that did, lose to the Quarians that aren't paranoid in the resulting Civl Skirmish. I'd hope this would teach me not to comment at 10:45 PMish, but I've had this lesson before and still not properly learned it. Sorry about that.
Draconic Hermit
2023-04-01 05:56:39 +0000 UTCYou are correct. What you missed is that "keelah" translates to "by the homeworld" .... which they never lost. Therefore it makes no sense to keep that or keelah se'lai or "by the homework I hope to see one day" They never left.
Primordial Vortex
2023-04-01 05:49:12 +0000 UTCLove the story so far, but I noticed a spelling error. I'm pretty sure it's Keelah, not Keelai. Keelah Se'lai being the full phrase, with Keelah being used in a similar manner like how people use gods, force and similar entities in either an exasperated, awed and/or horrified manner. It's a phrase that's been used many, many times throughout the games and even explained what it means a couple of times during Tali's Story.
Draconic Hermit
2023-04-01 05:44:59 +0000 UTCYay! take an internet Hug!
StormCalledRaven
2023-04-01 05:22:42 +0000 UTC
