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Drew a new cover for this one and sent it to you. I think you’ll like it this time

BAC

When will chapter 3 come out?

Patrick Ferro

Probably not. Doesn't really fit him.

Primordial Vortex

Is saitama going to learn any martial arts out of boredom or curiosity?

Aeonstorm

Seeing you off Lily like that actually hurt. She was just a kid.

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara

Man now I wanna keep trying to draw this story.

BAC

God after rereading this chapter i just want the next one! Love it!! Keep up the awesome work you do man!

Gilorad

So glad this story got an update and that we finally saw Fubuki and Tatsumaki. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more!

Lord Terra

Fair enough. Still don’t like it. But the story is good enough I’ll still read it.

Kaminoryu

As I mentioned in the closing notes, it was at least partially a showcase of what Saitama was warning her about in canon. I just went all in on it where canon never did. They just bit off more than they could chew by a longshot. plus, yeah, kicking Fubuki in the ass. Also, I didn't want to deal with loads and Loads of characters, ngl. Especially ones who fall so readily into the background but would inevitably show up.

Primordial Vortex

Other than Lily, who’s the only other member of the Blizzard Group aside from Fubuki I cared about, dying, loved the chapter. Seeing Suiko and Mizuki’s growth so far was nice, and the sisters showing up was great, especially the back and forth between Tatsumaki and Saitama. I am curious why you killed off all of the Blizzard Group though. Was it just to give Fubuki a kick in the ass to get stronger? Cause killing all of them seems a bit much just for that. Just a few probably could have done that.

Kaminoryu

Damnit! Not Lily!

Kaminoryu