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Free Ideas for Twisted Metal - Delayed Input 405

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n38MM-PYlL0

Good morning! (I've been editing so late I can actually hear leaf blowers outside, that's just disrespectful)
I'll be back here for a post-show assessment on Sunday, so please use this post's comments to write any questions or feedback.

Thank you!!
-Kyle

Free Ideas for Twisted Metal - Delayed Input 405

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Every. Single. Point. is a great idea

Andreas Sjølund Pedersen

From last week's "This was a weird episode", you said you would like to make a joke that "makes you laugh at first and then you still enjoy thinking about much later". From the point of view of the audience I think you got it in this episode, and looks like it did it for you too since you laughed while recording. If this joke was your new year's resolution, what is your next objective for the year? Some comments: Intro: I had to listen to it 3 times to understand who was the clown but it is funny 9.5/10 (good joke, the ONE). Bog witch joke: 9/10 your emoting ascends the joke Character wish joke: 8/10 Sweet tooth joke: Halo section relatable, then it gets weirder 8.5/10 (every time I play Halo I remember this one) PS5 box joke: you are now using it, so you cannot through it away ;) Funny bits 8/10 outro: fun 8.5/10 Ideas 1st, 3rd, 5th feel like a conductor to ideas 2nd, 4th and 6th. I liked how this video was paced. It was consistent on less-jokie sections. I also liked how 1st and 3rd are actually constructive. 5th looks like an adapted version of the concept of ecosystems, where weird cannon stuff engages the community. 6th idea is half critic half joke, I really enjoy those. Editing/composition/Pacing: 9.5 Overall: 9.5 I feel better about the whole episode than individual pieces. That is interesting. I have to say that when the episode started I had no idea/interest in the game, but script made it interesting nevertheless. This episode feels like it was conceived title first and it makes and finger on the pulse. Solid episode, the best this season. It had constructive ideas, criticism and good jokes. Pace was really good! You have to feel proud about this one.


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