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Tuesday Showcase #42: Chapter 50 again

Hello everyone, and welcome to another Tuesday Showcase!

Last week, I told you about Laura asking Nathan if he was free on Sunday. But I forgot to tell you she was inviting him at your flat.

Chapter 50 feels like a milestone and, as it is the first chapter of the "Slut Era", I'm aiming for a long chapter with a lot of options offered to you. I hope you'll enjoy it!

See you next week for version 0.26!

Tuesday Showcase #42: Chapter 50 again

Comments

Nathan is the "neutral" bull and will stay. He's the one I know people will have no specific issues with. Every other character would have to represent something more specific, and some people wouldn't want that. So I have to have a neutral character that I can rely on for stories I need to tell, that I know everyone will see.

Le Stag

Hi! I'm new here. I love your story, Le Stag! And I'm always happy to see Nathan around.

MirrorMana

I may be alone with that but i think Nathan has overstayed his welcome. There is basically nothing left that Laura could do with him, that is in any way new or exciting. (She blew him, they had Intercourse, he was the first to come inside her, they did it at home already and so on) So what exactly is the point of keeping him in the story? At this point it's just repeating the same stuff over and over again. Unless you want her to fall in love with him or anything like that but then it's not NTS anymore. So i'll say get rid of him and introduce some new characters

DeadlySinner723

"But I forgot to tell you she was inviting him at your flat." I feel flushed reading that, palms are sweaty. They say you aren't paying for a product when subscribing to Patreon. I'm basically paying monthly to read how things are going with the development. Sure, there's a game I get to play a week before everyone else, but mostly it's these longer posts with text and images. This week had some nice images, but very little information. Or that's not true. There was a lot of information, but very few words. "...a long chapter with a lot of options..." These words, and the ones I began with, are making me crazy with anticipation! Being subscribed to this Patreon is so worth it, for more than just the game. The quality of waiting and being excited is almost as good as the game itself!

Beneath-a-Steel-Sky

a suggestion, if I may from someone who does this with his life, IRL. Some people are not comfortable with the husband being there when they sleep with someone, so having it be through text is plausible. I like voice to text. that works well I think. I was also thinking, Laura could decide to do an OF kind of thing maybe, and record content. Then, MC and Laura could discuss videos after the fact to change things up, and not have it just be "hey, we are talking about this in the madhouse" Which, honestly has always felt weird to me. I love sharing my wife, but the reclaiming and stuff is very intimate. Also, I think there can be more that takes place off screen. Not all conversations about decisions would be done in person. I know a lot of people were upset when Laura let Nathan come inside of her (A decision I loved by the way) But I dismissed this as a conversation MC and Laura had and discussed in bed, cuddling after sex. We wouldn't hear or know about it. I think there should be more like this. maybe in the moment, a prompt comes up like "Laura and I discussed this. I think it will be so hot."" Or "I hope she is joking, She knows how I feel about it" and then the scene changes accordingly. I swear, I'm done now. Sorry for rambling. I really love this game, an with the millions of clones out there, this is the only one that feels believable, somewhat, and I just want to help.

Taylor Hopkins

We'll see how milestone-ish it's going to be. I mean MC still didn't watch Laura fuck someone else if I'm correct. Would be a good milestone to have for a start of a slut era, no?

whf

So we're only getting one big chapters update I'm cool with that

Pillar Horizon


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