Naruto's Fetish Chapter Twenty-Four
Added 2024-08-08 17:56:56 +0000 UTCHey, guys!
I've been eager to dive back into my crown jewel, Naruto's Fetish, so thanks for voting on it last month! Thankfully, this one didn't take quite as long to get out as the last one did.
As I'm sure many of you noticed, I did go ahead and post the first chapter to Menma's Fetish over on Hentai Foundry & Ao3, which brought a wave of new subscribers. If you're new here, make sure to vote in the poll that I'll be posting later today! That will determine what I aim to work on this month.
I would wager that this chapter is going to be somewhat controversial in some ways, and yet, is also a return to form in others. I genuinely enjoyed writing & reading back over the chapter, so I hope you guys have the same reaction!
Give it a looksie, and definitely be sure to let me know what you thought in the comments below!
Chapter XXIV
Previous chapters:
Chapter I
Chapter II
Chapter III
Chapter IV
Chapter V
Chapter VI
Chapter VII
Chapter VIII
Chapter IX
Chapter X
Chapter XI
Chapter XII
Chapter XIII
Chapter XIV
Chapter XV
Chapter XVI
Chapter XVII
Chapter XVIII
Chapter XIX
Chapter XX
Chapter XXI
Chapter XXII
Chapter XXIII
Comments
Chapter was nice, although personally I’m not so sure about the expanding the cast thing, the more grandiose a plot, the less believable it feels, and also the keeping an “intimate unspeakable secret” thing gets lost. Open to see where it goes though, maybe you can keep the menma’s story on a “familiar” scale and experiment with this one.
Aizen
2024-08-09 12:05:28 +0000 UTC
