Freedom at Last (Part 2)

Had to revisit this one again and comment; absolutely loved it! I also enjoy the open ended conclusion, though this one was particularly good as a 'victory' for the littles which we don't often get. This second part is what made me join your Patreon! It's particularly exciting that Sarah didn't get away entirely unscathed either, losing her body hair and maybe some potty training too. I've always wanted to see a story about someone who does escape the diaper dimension completely, but at some steep cost.

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Yep. These are very fair points. Sarah's going to need to be quite the capable journalist to get herself out of this one. Butt frankly, the odds seem quite stacked against her. Baby walkers, bouncers, etc. are prime real estate for good humiliating fun. It was included at the commissioner's request, though I was 100% for it. I am absolutely going to find excuses for that stuff in my personal stories. It's simply too good not to! Thanks for the positive review, and I think there will be a return of this soon!

That was a very enjoyable story, but I doubt Sarah gets very far in a diaper. Even if she wasn't in a diaper there's still the tracking chip to worry about that will surely end any flight of freedom she had. All of that said, I was really surprised to see you write a scene with a baby walker since practically no one writes about those except for myself and maybe Personalias that one time. Overall, you did a great job!

There might be a chance of a sequel down the line! This strikes a funny place where it was a commission branching off of two shorts I'd written on my own previously. Without putting words in anyone's mouth, I think it's a good possibility that this won't be the last we hear from Anna or Sarah! As much as I love the open-endedness of the story, I think deep down I also would've loved the "bad end," where it's definitively clear that Sarah did not make it. Anna still gets her "victory" at the end, but in that context it becomes much more bittersweet. But who knows, maybe Sarah does get captured? Or maybe she doesn't? Find out next time!

This was not how I thought that was going to end! I do hope you write a part 3 where Sarah gets picked back up and returned to her mommy. I'm sure she'll be made to truly be the baby sister then! Great work!

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