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Early Bird: Predate Poaching, Ch 01

A bratty bunnygirl in heat intercepts Vix on his way to a first date. Can the bumbling buck fend her off without giving in to the thick breeding pheromones? Can he at least manage a cry for help before she notices him staring at her pretty armpits?

Hello, my lovelies! This was originally envisioned as a Valentine's Day story, but, well. It's a bit closer to Easter now. I hope you enjoy! I really liked writing this one. Not sure if I'll do a sequel, but keeping my options open.

This one's playing with some kinks I don't write a ton of, so check the tags!

EDIT: Due to a mixup, the story was mistitled "Be My Velveteen", a working title intended for when this was gonna be a Valentine's Day story. Sorry for the confusion! It has been corrected.

Comments

I resubscribed because of this holy shit it’s so fucking good.

lone-rev

I'm so glad you liked it! And yes, a full betrayal or exposure just didn't feel right for the characters, but I realized I could play with it with Vix and Disti not yet being "official".

Lorelei

Hot damn, that has got to be the best homewrecking story I've read. Just layer after layer of breaking. (Spoilers) I loved how it relied on manipulation, the uncertainty between hoped-for and committed status, and temporary weakness, rather than persuasive comparison. Maintaining Vix's loyalty and regret, instead of there being a point of complete betrayal, kept it hot the whole way through. Ugh. The forced impregnation; the imposition of attachment; the predator/prey. And using the possibility of discovery as another lever for control, but never springing that on the unconsenting third party...so good. Thank you for this.

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