This week in progress for Monday, August 9th, 2021. Page 12 ..
Added 2021-08-09 22:18:00 +0000 UTCThis week in progress for Monday, August 9th, 2021. Page 12 of the Onward comic, and the revised sketches of the remaining pages. I have been trying to get updates out on Sundays, as a regular thing, however this page was especially involved. I added two panels compared to the original sketch plan, and just over all the lighting was much more difficult to resolve, there was a lot of on-the-fly edits to the inks while I was shading that wound up taking much more time than normal. Regular weekly updates are still planned for Sundays.
Colt's imagination is straying into some fun territory. He fantasizes about an obedient but willful step-son, who won't take no for an answer but is submissive to his authority. It's what I like to think of as "wholesome perversion". Yes the last line is an Aladdin reference.
page 12 finalized
The comic was originally supposed to have ended on page 11, so here's the plans for the extended ending. I like that it addresses the events fully, and properly ends with something of a resolution. Colt gives Barley a short talk that lets him know everything is fine, but lays down some rules about living in a post-walked-in-on-you-masturbating-to-my-horse-dick-household, and maybe also reveals that he possibly has a mutual fantasy about Barley too? But it's ambiguous.
Colt's imagination is straying into some fun territory. He fantasizes about an obedient but willful step-son, who won't take no for an answer but is submissive to his authority. It's what I like to think of as "wholesome perversion". Yes the last line is an Aladdin reference.
page 12 finalizedThe comic was originally supposed to have ended on page 11, so here's the plans for the extended ending. I like that it addresses the events fully, and properly ends with something of a resolution. Colt gives Barley a short talk that lets him know everything is fine, but lays down some rules about living in a post-walked-in-on-you-masturbating-to-my-horse-dick-household, and maybe also reveals that he possibly has a mutual fantasy about Barley too? But it's ambiguous.
