While You Were Sleeping - Page 12
Added 2024-07-10 14:35:06 +0000 UTCThink the tighter pencils really helped - two day turnaround on this one!
One page left and then onto issue five.
Comments
Thank you! Thanks for picking those bits out. Slave over things like that, so it's rewarding hearing them called out.
Abe Snake
2024-07-11 15:57:16 +0000 UTCThis is such a good page. From the dialogue "m'boy", to that pause in the layout to give time for the coast to clear & Maise's husband's expression which perfectly shows without having to tell. Again I think this is a fantastic short story!
Stefer
2024-07-10 18:44:30 +0000 UTC
