Part 5 - Page 12
Added 2024-12-10 10:27:17 +0000 UTCRan this page through a couple of drafts. It was going to end with Maisie finding the strap-on, but I thought I'd do away with that and just have her using it in panel 3. Need to pick up the pace.
I'm imagining this montage sped up if it was in a film, with the Benny Hill Yakety Sax music playing over it.
Comments
The search for Bunny seems to be going really well!
A Man with Joe Name
2024-12-10 19:30:30 +0000 UTCA good montage is always welcome
Daniel G. Wilson
2024-12-10 19:00:12 +0000 UTC
